A dinner with commrades

[Nickolas Seafort]

The gaurds grabed him at the door. Standing I laughed, "Throw him in the brig" I watched as they hauled him out, it took 6 marrines to do it....

[Jade Mandelo]

"Security!" I calls "Escourt the Captain back to his ship. This will nto go unnoticed Captain" I say as security drag him out.

[Rory Jones]

"What the hell was wrong with that guy? I mean thats insurbordination, striking a fellow officer, and pure stupidity all in one, with respect ma'am, I'm sure most people would've known about your fathers admiral death in the line of duty, how some one could forget that, or not even know it in the first place is beyond me."

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Character Mal-function, disapproved editting

((note, sorry but he was already gone when you shot him, carried to my brig for a night. My addition, do not make me say 'I say' at the end of any of my posts again, it is what makes me more angry than anything to read, please avoid this at all costs in the future, other than that it is fine, word for word quote, and we can forget the shot.))

[Ray Talamoni]

As I walk past, I notice alot of commotion going on, but I know its a private event, so I won't interrupt.
~What the bloody hell's going on in here?~ I ask myself spotting a broken control panel.
~I'm going to need to fix that at the appropriate time of course.~

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Character Mal-function, Spelling and Grammar

ORIGINAL, after spelling and grammar corrections

As I walk past, I notice alot of commotion going on so put my head through the open door.
"What the bloody hell's going on in here?" I ask spotting a broken control panel.
"Im going to need to interupt you to fix that if you all don't mind?"

[Rory Jones]

"Well if you'll excuse me Captains." I claim as I pads my mouth, softly throwing the napkin down to the plate, and sliding back the wooden chair against the metal plating, I stand up.
"I best be off, I will see you in the battle. For Glory." I add at the end.